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[oathshackledbird]

How's My Driving?

How am I doing with Lancer (Diarmuid Ua Duibhne)? I am currently playing him at Ruby City & SoulGemmed and played him at The Tower of Animus until the game ended, and at Eachdradh until I dropped in December.  Please let me know if you have any questions, comments, or concerns. It's the only way I can get better!

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[(Anonymous)]

Hello,

You really abuse ellipses with Diarmuid when he's not a character that trails off in or has nearly as many incomplete thoughts as you write him having. I've noticed that your own writing quirks includes a lot of them, so I would just advise being more mindful of this and keeping the voices separate. You're a fun and very consistent tagger, otherwise, so keep that up.

[oathshackledbird]

Hi!

I am not sure if you will be coming back to this or not, but--if you feel comfortable doing so--could you specify which game you are noticing this in as I play him in two and the games have very different styles? It is something I don't really notice that much, so that would help me be looking for it more often. Otherwise, I will definitely try to keep this in mind. Usually, I try to keep it to when he is honestly confused and not sure where to take something (which is something that happens to everyone), but it is obviously slipping in more than I realize.

Thank you for taking the time to leave this comment, as I am always looking to improve!