oathshackledbird: Angle (Angle)
Diarmuid Ua Duibhne ([personal profile] oathshackledbird) wrote2020-01-02 09:22 pm
Entry tags:

HMD Post

How's My Driving?

How am I doing with Lancer (Diarmuid Ua Duibhne)? I am currently playing him at Ruby City & SoulGemmed and played him at The Tower of Animus until the game ended, and at Eachdradh until I dropped in December.  Please let me know if you have any questions, comments, or concerns. It's the only way I can get better!

This HMD has anonymous posting enabled and IP tracking off.

(Anonymous) 2015-08-01 01:56 am (UTC)(link)
Hello,

You really abuse ellipses with Diarmuid when he's not a character that trails off in or has nearly as many incomplete thoughts as you write him having. I've noticed that your own writing quirks includes a lot of them, so I would just advise being more mindful of this and keeping the voices separate. You're a fun and very consistent tagger, otherwise, so keep that up.